This page is designed to offer some suggestions about how you can reinforce the Six Traits at home. This are some of the same strategies teachers use in their classrooms on a daily basis so do not be surprised if your child says, "Hey we do that in class!"
Underneath each trait you will find some books that can be used to reinforce each of the traits. Many of the books listed can be found in the South Mountain Library, others will need to be purchased or checked out from one of the public areas.
Jump into the suggestions and have fun with your child! Remember writing is an exciting process!

IDEAS
Make lists of things to write about from ideas found in picture books
Compare the way two authors write about the same ideas
Count the number of words in the average picture book and discuss how long it really takes to tell a story or explain an idea well.
List topics that seem too big, trite, or overused and look for ways authors of picture books have handled these topics well
Select a topic from a content area class and create a picture book to teach someone else what has been learned.
Books that can be used to teach IDEAS
Miss Nelson Is Back, Harry Allard
Kofi and His Magic, Maya Angelou
The Important Book, Margaret Wise
Brown
The Armadillo from Amarillo, Lynne Cherry
Magic Schoolbus (Series), Joanna Cole
On the Day You Were Born, Debra Frasier
Roxaboxen, Alice McLerran
Three Stories You Can Read, Sara Swan Miller
ORGANIZATION
Write the story to wordless picture books and highlight the lead, transitional words, sequence patterns and the conclusion.
Create a set of the best openings found in picture books.
Create a set of the best conclusions found in picture books.
Write a student-friendly set of guidelines for how to write good openings and conclusions from the examples found.
Write a new ending to one of the picture books.
Write a new picture book using the A to Z format on a topic from the current curriculum.
Books that can be used to teach ORGANIZATION
It Was a Dark and Stormy Night, Janet Ahlberg
Comet's Nine Lives, Jan Brett
Little House, Her Story, Virginia L. Burton
Legend of the Blue Bonnet, Torrie DePaola
Rotten Ralph, Jack Gantos
Coming to America, Betsy Maestro
The Frog Princess, Pamela Man
VOICE
Compare the voices of two different authors exploring the same topic or idea.
After reading a variety of different picture books, make a list of all the words that can describe voice - angry, passionate, thoughtful, considerate, loving, mean-spirited, charming, eloquent, etc.
Play "Hearing Voices" by reading passages from familiar authors' works and matching their style to their books.
Make a list of places where you notice voice making a difference . . .
the type of books/print you like to read (what kind of voice is it?)
the things that you don't like to read (what kind of voice is it?)
Pick a famous person and explain an important concept or idea to them in picture book format.
Books that can be used to teach
VOICE
Fly Away Home, Eve Bunting
Stellaluna, Janell Cannon
The Fourth Little Pig, Teresa Celsi
Sadako, Eleanor Coerr
The Twits, Roald Dahl
Gift of the Sacred Dog, Paul Gobel
I Am the Dog, I Am the Cat, Donald Hall
Leo the Magnificent, Ann M. Martin
Guess How Much I Love You, Sam McBratney
Koko's Kitten, Dr. Francine Patterson
Stinky Cheese Man and Other F, Jon Scieszka
The Story of the Three Little Pigs, Jon Scieszka
Somebody and the Three Blairs, Marilyn Tolhurst
WORD CHOICE
Make a list of phrases or words that are particularly striking that you find in picture books.
Highlight all the active verbs found in favorite picture books.
Examine the proportion of types of words found in picture books . . .
How many verbs?
How many nouns?
How many adjectives and adverbs?
Discuss the different word choice techniques picture book authors use to create picture in the mind.
Write a picture book with blah, ordinary every day words - now rewrite it with colorful illustrative language (compare and contrast).
Books that can be used to teach WORD CHOICE
My Grandma Lives in Gooligulch, Graeme Base
Four Famished Foxes and Fosdy, Pamela Duncan Edwards
Snowballs, Lois Ehlert
Possum Magic, Mern Fox
Tough Boris, Mern Fox
Chrysanthemum, Kevin Henkes
Away from Home, Anita Lobel
Goldilocks and the Three Hares, Heidi Petach
The Whales, Cynthia Rylant
Shrek!, William Steig
SENTENCE FLUENCY
Read lots and lots of poetry picture books aloud and ask - "What makes language flow?" Make a list of ideas and find examples of prose picture books with good fluency.
Use choral reading as practice for where sentences and phrases begin and end, inflections, pauses etc.
Type the text of a picture book without any sentence breaks and then rewrite it showing the natural fluency through sentences.
Make a list of sentence beginnings that show variety.
Read two or three picture books and count how many simple, compound, and complex sentences are in each. Examine why some sentences work better in different sections of the text.
Tell a story/explain a concept aloud before you try and write it. Ask a partner to write down the beginnings of each of your sentences as you speak.
Books that can be used to teach SENTENCE FLUENCY
Flower Garden, Eve Bunting
Growtiger's Last Stand, T. S. Eliot
Time for Bed, Mern Fox
Wombat Divine, Mern Fox
Slugs, David Greenberg,
Chicka Chicka Boom Boom, Bill Martin
If I Were in Charge of the World, Judith Viorst
A Visit to William Blake's Inn, Nancy Willard
CONVENTIONS
Look at lots of picture books with an editor's eye. Can you find any mistakes?
Select several picture books that contain dialogue - do they follow the same convention rules?
Make a list of the conventions that should be standard and another list of those things that the author can personally control.
Deliberately make 5 spelling, 5 punctuation, 5 capitalization, 5 grammar/usage errors in your own picture book context and ask someone to find them and correct them. (They can correct other things they find, too!)
Type your picture book onto the computer and use the spell checker and thesaurus options. What do you have to know about conventions to make the best use of these tools?
Books that can be used to teach CONVENTIONS
Come Away from the Water, John Burningham
Behind the Mask, Ruth Heller
A Book Takes Root, Michael Kehoe
Amazing Pop-Up Grammar Book, Jenie Maizels
If You Were a Writer, Joan Lowery Nixon
From Pictures to Words, Janet Stevens
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